"Organizational Efforts need to be made to insight change that can provide more services and support to hotline counselors serving victims. Additionally, necessary adjustments need to be made, not only to the care provided to their clients, but also to the level of support given to their volunteers and co-workers. I have already begun to see changes within S.A.S.A as an organization, through[out] my study during a group meeting they introduced a couple trauma therapist who provide counseling to hotline counselors, which shows that changes have already started and this problem has been addressed by at least S.A.S.A.’s organizational leaders." (NEEDS REVIEW TO CHECK FOR TAMPERING]
-- This was my ONLY archived draft of this piece saved and NOW tampered with and deleted sometime TODAY, when it was uploaded to my computer, I know this piece was longer because it was an alternate conclusion I wrote, I wrote a couple different versions, and then excluded portions, that was what I went over with my LSAT tutor Lisa from Princeton Review, Fall 2007, I lived in Los Angeles, so I only touched base with her in time to grammar check my Conclusion. I wrote my paper ALL BY MYSELF, and we are required to have a committee to review our writing, and tell us what needs more work, help us through the development of our thesis, putting the research and the writing together, BY REQUIRING ASSIGNMENTS SUCH AS THESIS OUTLINES AND PROSPECTUS ETC. AND WE WRITE THE ABSTRACT AT THE END.